Incoherence

Shut up!
Quiet sleeper awaken with mystery swirling around the head.
Asks with amorous voice
“What lies below a quiet place?”

In the shadow realm
loneliness breaches origin of love

In the silence of the wind
yearns drizzles for extended hours

In the hustle and bustle of prostitutes
humble wanderer peeps up

In the rainy night
your absence makes me go numb

Get back to the sleeping world
muse about what to seek next.
For “affection of melancholy”
lies beneath the quiet place.

-inokio🌸

8 Comments

  1. Anthony's avatar Anthony says:

    Abstract complex and beautiful

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  2. Inokio's avatar Inokio says:

    Thanks for your insights😊

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  3. Priti's avatar Priti says:

    Beautiful poem! In the silence of wind makes us poetic 💐💐 well written

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  4. Inokio's avatar Inokio says:

    Thanks😊

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  5. Lia's avatar Lia says:

    Whoah! I wrote my last poem before reading yours, then came here after seeing your like (thank you!). Yet there are so many coincidences between our last poems. Isn’t it amazing when that happens, and yet not amazing at the same time? Our poems are on the same wavelength. I love reading the way you’ve written this complex feeling of being human in the process of awakening. It’s all t/here! Thank you for sharing <33

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  6. Inokio's avatar Inokio says:

    Yeah, it’s really amazing !!😊

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  7. ibarynt's avatar ibarynt says:

    Your poems goes deep into the soul…

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    1. Inokio's avatar Inokio says:

      Pleased to know that!!
      Thank you😊

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